Analysis of THE INSANE VOYAGE OF LIFE
The insane voyage of life
Is taking us on an awful ride,
So many people long for death
Hoping to never be denied.
Unwillingly we all are born
Into the cold malignant Earth, after
Our parents' thoughtless coupling
Resulting in our unchosen birth.
Even in the crib, we knew the error
That our carnal parents had made,
Forcing us into a dreadful world
In which all happiness is now forbade.
As we start to crawl we learn the horror
Of what our life is bound to put us through,
As everyday terrors are surrounding us
As life's every action seems like abuse.
The insane voyage of life
Is carrying us all unwillingly along,
We cry, we try to resist the journey
But in the end, we're not that strong.
So, off to school we soon have to march
To be subjected to the hype of education,
To be lied to and taught empty 'facts'
And jingoism about our 'great nation'.
By the time we start our working life
We're well and truly ready to pass on,
But by the time we're allowed to retire
Our sixty-five best years have fully gone.
Till at last, we feel the end is coming
Yes, we hope that our time is nigh,
Because after all these terrible years
It's safe to say that we're willing to die.
THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | Abxb xcdx cexe cxxx Afxf xgxg axxx dhxh xxx |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (23%) |
Metre | 0011011 110111101 11010111 10110101 01001111 0101010110 10101010 01001011 1000111010 110101011 101010101 0111001101 1111111010 11101111111 11011010101 11100101101 0011011 110011010001 1111101010 10011111 111111111 110101011010 111101101 01000110110 1011110101 1101010111 1101101101 10101111101 1111101110 111110111 0110111001 1111111011 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,210 |
Words | 233 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 108 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 26 |
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The insane voyage of life Is taking us on an awful ride, So many people long for death
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Written on August 15, 2021
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 15, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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