Analysis of When closed eyes deceive



Maybe my expectations were to high
or maybe it was easier to made
specticail of.

In all it bares no simulance to what any
racional mind would conceive as being loved or adorned.

When what words
With any simulance
Of thought minds
the maintance of men
what speaks to his needs
and desires.
Only the loved might find
Love in togetherness.
Unloved you chore to be
recognized.


Scheme XXX AX BBXXXXXXAX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 101010011 1101110011 11 0111111110 111011101101 111 1101 111 0111 11111 0010 100111 100100 011111 10
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 359
Words 67
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 10
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 100
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

Love that speaks me. What than makes me Loved.

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Submitted by allanterry542curtis_2 on August 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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