When closed eyes deceive



Maybe my expectations were to high
or maybe it was easier to made
specticail of.
 
In all it bares no simulance to what any
racional mind would conceive as being loved or adorned.

When what words
With any simulance
Of thought minds
the maintance of men
what speaks to his needs
and desires.
Only the loved might find
Love in togetherness.
Unloved you chore to be
recognized.

About this poem

Love that speaks me. What than makes me Loved.

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Submitted by allanterry542curtis_2 on August 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX AX BBXXXXXXAX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 359
Words 67
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 10

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