Analysis of When You Are Around..



I feel I’m on a journey with you
I feel happy and content too
I feel like I'm on top of a mountain and free
I feel like am bird soaring high on a tree
I can hear my heart thumping fast
I can now breathe some fresh air to last
I feel that I am riding blind on cloud nine
I wish this moment can now stop all time
I know I can be myself with you
I don’t need a front, just me true
I can be quiet, naughty and bashful
I feel secured, fulfilled and peaceful
I feel that I'm wanted and needed by someone
I want to share and bare it all one by one
I can just sit and gaze at you
I can rave and be amazed by you
I like being hugged tightly by you
I like laying cuddled nightly with you
I like taking care of you
I like talking thru things that worry you too
I can watch senseless tv
I can engage in deep conversations freely
I am quite frankly scared too
Thoughts of loneliness do construe
You give me hope and courage within
You give me a reason to believe in


Scheme AABBCCDEAAFFGGAAAAAABBAAHH
Poetic Form
Metre 111101011 11100101 111111101001 11111101101 11111101 111111111 11111101111 1111011111 11111111 11101111 1111010010 110101010 11111001011 11110111111 11110111 111010111 111011011 1110101011 1110111 11101111011 1111011 11010101010 1111011 11100101 111101001 1110101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 931
Words 202
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 744
Words per stanza (avg) 202
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Written on August 10, 2021

Submitted by Maheshw on August 10, 2021

Modified by Maheshw on August 10, 2021

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Mahesh Wadhwani

I always apologize for the length of my text as that’s the best way for me to communicate rather than verbally!! Not a man of many words but still manage to doodle when in mood to write, which is rare!! I am not even sure if what I scribble is poetry or even what form or just words that rhyme!! To me writing is an art, a sign of creativity and a means of expression. I don't really think that anyone can just write without any feelings, without having felt, without having lived, experienced or cherished. Whatever one writes, there is some amount of a persons own feelings and presence or of those around them, indicated in the works. So I am thankful to all the people in my life and those yet to come for having given me life, love, happiness and even pain. At-least I have had the opportunity to feel it , live it and express it, whatever it maybe. Cheers! more…

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