Analysis of Unhinged World



If I had a choice

I'd remove the complexities of my mind

I'd freeze the time lost to the traumatic events

I'd freeze the pain

I'd place a steel shield around my heart enclosed with metal beams

I'd replace my bones with titanium

I'd power wash my brain of all of its experiences and fill it with the thoughts of a life fulfilled, with some trials and many periods of happiness.

Furthermore, I'd provide myself with a true father

After a moments work

Complete success will be the result.

The pain will disappear

My purpose would be fulfilled

I'd rid the world, of the isms in life

The violence within the world

The light bugs

Everyone would love one another regardless of differences

Yet, It isn't

I have to carry my cross

Accept my past

Among the destruction

I have to figure out a new way to rebuild a new path

With what remains

I continue to be a work in progress

God, is still not through with me yet.


Scheme X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 10100100111 110111001001 1101 110110111011101 111110100 1101111111010000111011010111100101001100 10101110110 100101 010111001 01101 1101101 1101101001 01000101 011 1011101001011000 1110 1111011 0111 010010 111101011101011 1101 1010110101 11111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 969
Words 187
Sentences 3
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 30
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

The changes attached to My world As time passes.

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Written on June 30, 2020

Submitted by ryt0913 on August 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Tonya Redd

Tonya Redd is a daughter, mother, nurse who has always loved poetry and has an immense love and passion for writing, and hopes that one day she can say that she in fact created a full body of works. more…

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