Analysis of Unhinged World
If I had a choice
I'd remove the complexities of my mind
I'd freeze the time lost to the traumatic events
I'd freeze the pain
I'd place a steel shield around my heart enclosed with metal beams
I'd replace my bones with titanium
I'd power wash my brain of all of its experiences and fill it with the thoughts of a life fulfilled, with some trials and many periods of happiness.
Furthermore, I'd provide myself with a true father
After a moments work
Complete success will be the result.
The pain will disappear
My purpose would be fulfilled
I'd rid the world, of the isms in life
The violence within the world
The light bugs
Everyone would love one another regardless of differences
Yet, It isn't
I have to carry my cross
Accept my past
Among the destruction
I have to figure out a new way to rebuild a new path
With what remains
I continue to be a work in progress
God, is still not through with me yet.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101 10100100111 110111001001 1101 110110111011101 111110100 1101111111010000111011010111100101001100 10101110110 100101 010111001 01101 1101101 1101101001 01000101 011 1011101001011000 1110 1111011 0111 010010 111101011101011 1101 1010110101 11111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 969 |
Words | 187 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 24 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 30 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 7 |
About this poem
The changes attached to My world As time passes.
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Written on June 30, 2020
Submitted by ryt0913 on August 09, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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