Analysis of Senior Sex



When grandpa died I went home to check
if grandma was okay or a nervous wreck.
Grandma’s fine but I found out that when
he was making love he died there in the den.

It was something I never thought I’d hear.
Both were past ninety up there in their years.
I asked why they had taken such a chance,
he was not as young as he was in France

She said, “Nothing new, we did it all the time,
just set a rhythm by the church bells chime”.
She wiped a tear and said, “He’d be alive today,
if that ice cream truck had gone the other way”.


Scheme AABB CDEE FFGG
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 1101110101 11111111 11101111001 1 1110110111 1011011011 1111110101 1111111101 1 11101111101 1101010111 110101110101 11111110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 537
Words 111
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 401
Words per stanza (avg) 111

About this poem

This poem was derived from a joke that I heard. I did several of these.

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Written on December 07, 2017

Submitted by UJ on August 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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