Analysis of David and Bathsheba (Part 4)

Royston 1946 (Reading)



Great was the passion in David the king
that drove him to do this dastardly thing.
Uriah the Hittite had now been slain
so that David his new conquest could gain.

The King of Israel was free to do
Those things that he had always wanted too
So Bathsheba became his new wife
and he was enjoying his kingly life.

Time passed by and David had forgotten
his deeds so shameful and so rotten.
But God remembered and saw everything
and sent Nathan the prophet to see the king.

Nathan stood before king David now
and began to explain to David how
a rich man, poor man and little ewe lamb
became entangled in a dangerous game.

The rich man took everything and killed the ewe
And there was nothing the poor man could do.
David the shepherd king ranted and raved
He thought that the rich man was so depraved.

Saying “As sure as the Lord lives he should die, ”
“Tell me who he is.” Was the king’s reply
“YOU ARE THE MAN,” Nathan the prophet said
filling the king with foreboding and dread.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEAA FFXX CCGG HHII
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 1101001001 1111111001 10101111 1110111011 0111001111 111111101 101001111 0110101101 1110101010 111100110 110100110 01100101101 101011101 0011011101 0111101011 01010001001 0111100101 0111001111 1001011001 1110111101 10111011111 1111110101 1101100101 1001101001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 990
Words 188
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted by royston on July 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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