Analysis of Stolen pain

Carrie Zis 1981 (Narrogin)



Stealing my words of my raw emotion, sharing with others is a betrayal I can not bare

My private words my feelings noted for me alone, my burden to bare and my story to share

If I wanted others to read it, you could by it at a book shop, I do not need to share my depths of grief and suffering

Some of it is hard to understand, and no one should they did not walk in my shoes and feel those things and hurt that way, your pain is yours I do not invade it

I do not tell others to try to understand, I accept it as I hope you would accept mine, not share it around, and make it known how fucked I am and fall in love with ppl who hurt me

not love and build up like I was dreaming they would, I feel stabbed, my hearts shatter more so indeed, how could you be so cruel to take my pain and give it away


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Characters 794
Words 171
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 103
Words per line (avg) 29
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on May 25, 2020

Submitted by Cazil on July 18, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Carrie Zis

Centre of Expression 2007 Best Poems and Poets 2012 International Who's who in poetry 2012 Born in Western Australia 1981 First became interested in poetry in 1994, starting to write original works from the same time, being a featured poet in a few compilations above, more than these but these are the ones I own. Starting a new journey in 2021 hoping to write and publish a series of personal selections. Currently has a portfolio of 500+ original works more…

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