Analysis of Outdated Purpose

Lawrence S. Pertillar 1947 (Connecticut)



I may have been born taught to teach,
To do foolish things.
As if this path in life I should take.
Finding this way easier to escape,
From being labelled a noncomformist.
You know...
Someone who refused,
To be identified as another fool.

But I was not the one,
To accept limits and labels.
Or allow myself restrictions on me placed.
For whatever the reason,
I had been blessed to be different.
Choosing a path to adventure,
To explore in my own way.

I awakened one day to realize this...
Fools may be born,
And encouraged to learn...
Those lessons to them taught.
Just to receive acceptance and approval.

However...
Remaining to stay a fool to please others,
Is not a life to live and depend...
Upon those made fools.
This to discover can be...
For many,
Traumatically dramatic!

Especially for the ones,
Looking for a way out...
From the foolish and stupid things they do.
With this to accuse others,
Who are not fools...
To defend their ignorance.

As if they should be held accountable.
And felt responsible...
For the the choice clowns make to expect,
Acts to perform in a circus...
Guarantees long lasting equal benefits.
To not eventually,
Outdates the purpose for the circus.
Along with those made fools,
Remaining clowns.
All around and in every town found!


Scheme XXXXAXAX BXABACX XXXAD CEAFGGX XAAEFX DDAHXGHFXA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 11101 111101111 1011100101 1101001 11 1101 1101010101 111101 10110010 1011010111 110010 111111100 10011010 1010111 1010111101 1111 001011 110111 11010100010 10 01011011110 110111001 01111 1101011 110 1010 010101 101011 1010010111 1110110 1111 1011100 1111110100 010100 100111101 11010010 0111010100 1101000 10101010 011111 0101 1010010011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,221
Words 221
Sentences 29
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 5, 7, 6, 10
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 163
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted by lpahtillah on July 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:06 min read
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