Analysis of My Picture – Part 2



Let me present you with my pictures
For each of your songs.
Uncoloured are most of them,
For your all saddest songs.

They are very pleasant
For sharing your experience,
Each poem is melodic;
And makes meaningful sense.

After reading it,
My boorish life has to be abandoned;
To draw each picture
For this well-structured statement.

My hard task was to match
Each of your emotional poems.
For that, I have had to reawaken
My artistic dreams
And fulfill our omens.

Adding to art my visual part.
For me it was hard,
To the reader your art.
You have communicated convincingly

My enjoyable problem was
That all your work is simple
Believe me when I say;
Add painful ripples

Lest you can no more be art,
There was nothing left for me nor you;
To kill myself, hurting others,
Is no way of valuing you.
That each of my pictures

Adds painful ripples
Your tuneful poems may well be
Flowing from your sad heart.
I do appreciate them more
As a singer as all are crying art.

Let us both thank Ann
For valuing the work
Of humans like us.
Worthily existing with a lost cause,
Yet still proud as us


Scheme ABXB CXXX XXXC XXXXX DXDE FXXG DHAHA GEDXD XXIFI
Poetic Form Etheree  (38%)
Metre 111011110 11111 11111 111101 111010 11010100 1101010 011001 10101 1101111010 11110 1111010 111111 111010010 111111010 10101 0011010 101111001 11111 101011 1101000100 10100101 1111110 011111 11010 1111111 111011111 1111010 11111001 111110 11010 11010111 101111 1101011 1010111101 11111 110001 11011 10101011 11111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,043
Words 201
Sentences 13
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

Through the words of Ann Austin and the words and art of JLD. {Ann, an editor for the first edition had appreciated my poems} [JLD is Jawahar Datta, my brother]

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Modified on March 05, 2023

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