Analysis of Forever Under



Spookier cemetery rotting under through
pristine visiting surface, of someone you knew
remembrance of times good and bad
deathly inhabited and hauntingly sad
believing their in a better place
no pain, no suffering, death did erase
the lack of friendship torn in half
wishing you were back with a tear and a laugh
peace in rest, forever you are gone
to a place of spirits, I'm occasionally drawn
the lack of earthly souls without
temporary flower placing, your return in doubt
reaching for heavens higher gate
the day you died, was gods invitational date
reborn into energy invisible light
is there seasons or day or night?
Wishfully present entity souls
your lack of being, leaving gapping holes
a tear and a smile, mixed emotions control
now you're in permanence gods side stroll


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 110010101 10100101111 01011101 10010001001 010100101 1111001101 01110101 10101101001 101010111 1011101010001 01110101 100101010101 10110101 01111101001 110110001001 11101111 100101001 111101011 01001101001 110100111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 780
Words 132
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 637
Words per stanza (avg) 132

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Submitted by Soul-to-song on June 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brian Oliveri

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