Analysis of Ships
Bob Vavilis 1963 (Chios)
I gaze in awe at the ships moored on the harbor—
and daydream of journeys … lands voyagers have seen—
the whipping of Aeolus’* winds on the sails—
Poseidon’s calm and treacherous seas;
I have a home and dear ones that love me,
yet my spirit craves for open seas;
voyages teemed with challenges and struggles,
and never-ending odysseys.
Embrace me tightly, kiss me long, walk with me to the shore…
Enter my mind, see through my eyes, exhilarate my soul.
Tell me that you’ll pray to your god to watch carefully over me;
light a candle, whisper to me … ask the winds to blow your thoughts to me.
And when my heart and mind have won—conquering fears and hopes…
I’ll fight my way back—sail home to you—construct our wonderland.
We’ll forge our experiences, fears, and dreams, into a renewed form of life;
and if we grow languid and restless from the mundane—
we’ll walk hand-in-hand toward the harbor’s ships.
*Aeolus-ruler of the winds
Scheme | XXAB CBXA XXCC XX XXX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110110111010 01110110011 010111101 1101001 1101011111 111011101 10011100010 010101 01110111111101 1011111101011 1111111111100101 10101011101111111 01110111100101 111111111011010 11100100010101001111 0111100101001 11101010101 110101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 951 |
Words | 165 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 2, 3, 1 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 40 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 121 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
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Submitted on May 18, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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