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Swept off of my feet in the 3rd grade, Listening to poems Robert Frost had made. Sat under the cover of the tree's shade, As all the background noise fades. I started to find what came to mind, And put it on a paper.

  August 2022     1 year ago

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The Answer

He awoke in the depths surrounded by the dark,
Narrow and winding was the path;
He looked the other way, but to his dismay,
The path was all he had.

The cave was deep and dark as could be,
Burdened with memories and scars.
The answer lies at...

– by Kaushik Prabhav

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The story laid out is well written. I felt the pain pierce my heart when I came to the second half of the poem. And the parallel drawn between the treehouse in the tree and the treehouse in heaven was absolutely beautiful, something I never expected. And when I read the title, I was apprehensive at first, but the poet has done full justice to the title and couldn't have selected a better one. This is a poem has still left me with a heavy heart, much after reading it. And technically speaking, the rhyme scheme was in good taste and the syllable length was also consistent. But the emotional aspect of this poem is it's greatest quality. I give this my vote without any hesitation. 

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