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"Neuroma"
No one can mend date
I got it so late
I with my self hate
I am Getting weight
More than Ninety eight
When I look my Pate *
Disturbing my gate
Fighting with my fate
So food why I ate
Me should pay its rate
Doctor says wait wait

* Pate an Urdu word meant Tummy

"Radiant"
I am wake
For God sake
If you make
Try en bake
Tasty fake
Any one cake
Taking Oath
Hands of both
I would take
On Salt Lake
 

2 years ago

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my poem "Love Law" is also available here

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My other poem "Radiant" is also available

2 years ago

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My other "Love Law" is also available here

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May You Happy always

2 years ago

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