Weight



No one can mend date
I got it so late
I with my self hate
I am Getting weight
More than Ninety eight
When I look my Pate *
Disturbing my gate
Fighting with my fate
So food why I ate
Me should pay its rate
Doctor says wait wait

* Pate an Urdu word meant Tummy

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Written on January 09, 2021

Submitted by AlirazaAhmed on September 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAAAAAAAAA X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 247
Words 57
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 1

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2 Comments
  • AliRazaAhmad
    my poem "Love Law" is also available here
    LikeReply2 years ago
  • AliRazaAhmad
    My other poem "Radiant" is also available
    LikeReply2 years ago

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