Adventure22##'s comments

This seems like a realistic description of romantic infatuation.
Still like the subject!

Another one of your pieces which I so enjoy.

Truly ingenious and masterfully written!

Dreams, indeed, are free of barriers. One may travel anywhere in them.
It simply shows the power of one's unconscious mind.
I liked the ideas expressed in this poem.

It's obvious you are a deep thinker with something to say!
Melita

I admire your poetic abilities. As a Christian I believe life is a gift, naturally.
I am here to glorify Jesus Christ and fulfill the two greater commandments of the new covernant. Thanks for your work! Melita more »

Enjoyed the insight in your poem!
Hope we all can gain daily insight from above.
Sincerely,
Melita C. Warren

mcw

Deep, heavy, intense reflection. Great metaphors!

Very deep and well written. I love the metaphors!