IntoIntuition's comments

that's remarkably thoughtful of you, to visit back and offer wonderful feedback and a kind word. This was meaningful to me, as I've been needing a little encouragement. Thank you, truly!

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, and it fits into my own personal criteria for Poem of the Month. It's rather humorous, because your poem is quite uplifting and positive, whereas the poem I had submitted had a far darker theme. For some reason the stylization, sentence structure, and flow appealed to me greatly. It's definitely something I needed today, so thank you. You have my vote. more »

There is quite a wonderful storytelling dynamic that this poet had implemented, and the rhyme scheme, to me, was in appropriately good taste. Certainly thought-provoking, where one may relate to the material. The rhythm was acceptable, yet I feel not fully polished. All-in-all, I narrowed down 126 poems to around 40 pinned ones, and then I was left finally after deep consideration with "One Heart, One Soul, Too Much" (which to me is rather hopeful and reminiscent of the poem "Don't Quit") and this poem. This one has my vote. more »

"The Poem Comment" (Just now)

A plethora of wonderful, entrancing selections
intriguing each reader while evoking emotions;
Delving into each realm of inflections;
Experiencing whirlwinds of literary devotion;

Candidates of praise, and yet all worthy,
of acknowledgement and a fair shake;
These weaved expressions, slender or girthy,
deserve every consideration to take.

Some will tantalize, others, inspire
whether read-into, sifted-though, or skimmed.
But Alas! Each of us has that one we admire,
The work of art we believe should win.

I wanted to offer something creative which winding down tonight. Good luck to all participants! more »