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Underwater

Charu 2004 (Aurangabad)

I am a diver
Who is drowing in water
As oxygen level is over
I feel my life getting shorter

Inside my body
I can feel the anxiety
And I wish after the death
My soul could get eternity

Now that I know
I want to die happily
Taking the good memories
And feeling the atmosphere peacefully

Slowly slowly I could
Feel my body going deep inside
Keeping in heart the last picture
Which is captured from my eyesight
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Submitted by patnicharu48 on May 04, 2021

Modified on April 28, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAA BBXB XBXB XXAX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 391
Words 79
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
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