Analysis of Underwater

Charu 2004 (Aurangabad)



I am a diver
Who is drowing in water
As oxygen level is over
I feel my life getting shorter

Inside my body
I can feel the anxiety
And I wish after the death
My soul could get eternity

Now that I know
I want to die happily
Taking the good memories
And feeling the atmosphere peacefully

Slowly slowly I could
Feel my body going deep inside
Keeping in heart the last picture
Which is captured from my eyesight


Scheme AAAA BBXB XBXB XXAX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 11010 111010 110010110 11111010 01110 11100100 0111001 11110100 1111 1111100 1001100 010010100 101011 111010101 10010110 1110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 391
Words 79
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Modified on April 28, 2023

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