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You Surrender

M.Useless

You surrender
Like the earth surrenders to the sun.
Outstretched
Luxurious
Hills and valleys basking in the warmth
Marvelous
Magnificent
Glistening petals in the morning dew
Thirsting
Unquenchable
Deeply drinking from your eternal river
Whisper
Gentle
Your breath a rose in the spring breeze
Floating
Drifting
Dandelions along their ageless journey
Seeking
Searching
Their forever destination beneath the green
Rebirth
Life anew
Growing, nurturing, caring, loving
Ablaze
Burning
Never extinguished nor forgotten
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Submitted by M.Useless on April 14, 2021

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Scheme ABCDEDFGHIAAIJHHKHHLMGHNHB
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 496
Words 72
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
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