Analysis of You Surrender



You surrender
Like the earth surrenders to the sun.
Outstretched
Luxurious
Hills and valleys basking in the warmth
Marvelous
Magnificent
Glistening petals in the morning dew
Thirsting
Unquenchable
Deeply drinking from your eternal river
Whisper
Gentle
Your breath a rose in the spring breeze
Floating
Drifting
Dandelions along their ageless journey
Seeking
Searching
Their forever destination beneath the green
Rebirth
Life anew
Growing, nurturing, caring, loving
Ablaze
Burning
Never extinguished nor forgotten


Scheme ABCDEDFGHIAAIJHHKHHLMGHNHB
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 101010101 01 0100 101010001 100 0100 1001000101 1 1 10101101010 10 10 11010011 10 10 1000111010 10 10 10100100101 01 101 101001010 01 10 100101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 496
Words 72
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 436
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Submitted by M.Useless on April 14, 2021

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