To Thee

For a valentine, been putting effort into editing and re-writing, adding new stuff. Please give an honest opinion. I need this perfect even if it will take me all night ! Thanks
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Prudent chirps a natures bird
To sing hope on tongue of tongues
Where speaks a passioned heart
Which grow'st with affection

Upon appealing and snaring eyes
And doth they ever so lighten
This forlorn little bird
Who wonders upon thee

To guide his thriving heart
Into a mystery if prefered
Which too will tint his virtue
Upon a new found solicitude

So will thou accept his gaiety?
Or disregard this little birds vow
For his heart will never beat
Until thine is met sweet

Happy Valentines Day !

2/12/13 ~ Erwin Jung