Sweet Surrender



sweet surrender,sweet release
lying numb,lying attentive
I can hear the soft parade of the winter
approaching---------
all my green will now turn red,orange
purple,pink
O my summer don`t You leave
Winter is too much suffering
Sleep,mating,milk
sweet surrender,sweet release
Alaknanda whisper in love mid-stream
skay-a-starry
moon-a-music
she plays sink-at-seas
she rises,she leaps
dolphins,seahorses,mermaids
will-o-the-wisps
wavelets kiss her love neck aquatic,mystique
sweet surrender/sweet release
solo songs/monologues
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AbcdedfddAghijkaadal
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 503
Words 76
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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