Sailing



I like the way Shelley and Keats
folded their poems into paper boats
and sailed them on Saturday afternoons
on lake waters where spectators
questioned their origamic nonsense
insisted they were too grown-up to
act grown-down but the two poets
went about their sailing unperturbed

because sometimes poems need relaxation
they need to close their eyes
and sail beneath a hot sun
or as Keats might say, Stew awhile,
or Shelley, We need to test the waters…
so their white poems sailed in a fleet
of rhythmic lines laden with cargoes
of imagery and some bobbing with rhymes

(Before you race to Google-search
"the paper boats of Shelley and Keats,"
remember even we unknown poets
have a right to poetic license)

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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXBXXCX DXDXBXXX XACX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 689
Words 123
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 4

Salvatore Buttaci

A retired teacher and compulsive writer, I ply the writing craft daily, composing poems, stories, articles, blogs, and letters.My book, A Family of Sicilians...is available right here at http://stores.lulu.com/ButtaciPublishing2008Also there is a chapbook for English teachers who need help teaching poetry. It's called Painless Poetry.and another book of mine, a collection of 164 short-short stories, Flashing My Shorts, is availableFROM AMAZON.COM at   http://tinyurl.com/26u8huk OR KINDLE EDITION  at  http://tinyurl.com/2f369weI live in West Virginia with the love of my life, my wife Sharon. more…

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