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morning air

clifton redmond

Too afraid to cry
In these tears i may drown
These soft burning thoughts
Im a fool for you still
The morning she yearns
For a blissfull picture
But one in bblank reality
I just cannot see
The street sounds they haunt me
For why i can't say
Grime scent of a river
Minced with the trash
I feel such emptyness
Within my core
But mornings air
She has no clues
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Submitted on January 24, 2013

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Scheme ABCDEFGGGHFICJKL
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 340
Words 71
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
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