Analysis of morning air



Too afraid to cry
In these tears i may drown
These soft burning thoughts
Im a fool for you still
The morning she yearns
For a blissfull picture
But one in bblank reality
I just cannot see
The street sounds they haunt me
For why i can't say
Grime scent of a river
Minced with the trash
I feel such emptyness
Within my core
But mornings air
She has no clues


Scheme ABCDEFGGGHFICJKL
Poetic Form
Metre 10111 011111 11101 101111 01011 10110 110110 11101 011111 11111 111010 1101 1111 0111 1101 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 340
Words 71
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 284
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted on January 24, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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clifton redmond

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