Losing Love



Losing love is like broken strings
On a one keyed piano of black and white
It's white knuckles and clenched teeth
And all you held dear losing sight

It's like climbing a cladder with one rung
A slammed door on a vast horizon
A journey over before it's ever begun
It's Hercules minus the titan
With no one to be strong for
No one to hold onto

Losing love is like shattering a glass
And watching as the shards jump astray
Like watching all you have, break
And you can't look away

Your heart, your soul, and all your feeling
Your breadth of wonder and painted ceilings
Flash out of this world in a single breath
And life becomes the profound silence of death
Losing love.
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Submitted on April 27, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABXB XCCCXX XDXD XAEEX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 650
Words 126
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 4, 5

Ashley Stoltzfus

Hi, my name is Ashley. I have been writing for quite a while and have written many a things. Some things are not that great and need not be shared, the rest shall be for your amusement. When I get older and closer to retirement and much wise, I hope to write poems as a post-retirement career. Thank you for visiting and enjoy~! more…

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