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intimacy

david holmberg

look at me
look deep inside
disappear with me
far away in to
different spaces

see my mind
see my soul
all of you,
all of this
all for a fleeting moment

let's slip away
further away
closer together
in this world we are one
I, the wind
you, the water

plucking your soulstrings
like birds, playing
let me find you in morning rays
like for the first time
green eyes wandering

exhale, without mind
entire whirlwinds from your lungs
no mind to hurt,
searching and being found
how great the feeling
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Submitted on July 13, 2017

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXABC DXBXX EEFXDF CGXXG DXXXG
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 466
Words 92
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 6, 5, 5
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david holmberg

I'm a Swedish artist with many fields of interest.My poems are often about spirituality, philosophy, love, emotions and sometimes they are even a tad nonsensical :)I have a history of depression and alot of reflection about my self, conciousness and the world. I am introverted, honest and love to delve into the different realms of art and spirituality!My poetry is very personal and I never try to mimic any other poets.While I haven't explored the stilistical forms of poetry so much I try to work with expression and painting a picture, try to keep it as free as possible. Although I might try out different forms in the future should I feel to. Aaaanyways welcome to my page, hope you enjoy yourself! Any feedback or just spontaneous reactions are much appreciated! :-) more…

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