I saw it with my own eye



I was so hurt when l saw you talking
to her that hurts but you can't talk
to me why.I'm not special to you but your
special to me.My first love hurts so much
l cry so much and your not there to dry
my eye.When i look in the mirror l say
myself you don't want me in your life
Maybe if l wasnt a good girl? Lot of
peoples walks out of my life but l
will never think you walk way from
me and that hurt me so much.I
wasn't worry you did hurt me so
badly l have saddness.I'm going
to be a church woman the way God
wants me to be.I love you
so much!
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJDKALMD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 528
Words 126
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

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