Her Beauty



The silver ocean waves of passion
Washes over my body
In her touch, silver silk, slowly wrapped my heart
In her beauty, in her wonder, in her art
The Venus De Milo was fashioned on her beauty
The Goddess of Love watches over:
Sending her- love and grace
If I was to stare at the sheer beauty of
Mona Liza's enigmatic smile
Her smile would pale in comparison

Unaware of her beauty
Her innocence, the loveliness of her
Her elegance, in her wonder in her art
Her love, the allurement of her wonder
Her beautiful symmetry, elegance in motion
Forever -wonders before my eyes
Her loveliness her beauty her smile
My attraction, my love- washes over me
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Submitted on April 10, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCBDXXEA BDCDAXEB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 627
Words 117
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 8

Jane Lomas

All poems included here are just first draft's. I hadn't written poetry for a few years, so to polish my art and find my muse I posted some quickly written poems on these pages so I could see your response. It has helped me by reading your reviews about my poems (all of which I have taken into consideration) all comments have helped me improve my work a great deal. Thank you. I realy enjoy reading all your poems. I find some very insperational, some very heart felt, some very deep, which has helped me to push myself and dig deeper. Very deep, on some occasions. So my own poetry has vastly improved- since I have joined this sight, it has certainly helps splur me on. Thank You for all your imput and replies, please keep it up. It has helped educate me and make me a better writer. So if you would like to read more of my poems (the ones I've taken time over, polished them, played with them, worked on them till they truly worked)for your pleasure I have now with confidence published my own book. A MEASUREMENT OF THE MIND, POEMS OF LIFE AND LOVE. its available on ebook at Amazon. Thank You. more…

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