A Note To You My Love



I Write Down my heart in a Note, I have for you, My Love
I hold on to all your words, You had lock them tight
within my heart,

I think of you My Love every morning and night,
So I write you this Note for you to read why you are
out in War,

If these things you faithfully do to fight for a world
so cruel, I put my heart in this Note for you to read
of dreams that will come true.'

My Love, I love you for everything you do,
You fight for all our rights, You stand strong for freedom
Of Love, For hope in a wide rang,

Your love is so strong to fight for the lives of the young
and the old, Doomed parents and doomed child both hold on
to the hope this war will soon be no more,

This old crime of a war, that is so unkind,
You My Love is always on my mind in the battle you fight
for all our lives,

You give me the strength to hold on to every word you ever
told me, The sun that shines up in the sky, I see you,
The stars that shine at night, their is that one with Your
name on it,

Yet my soul drew back all my pains, I write you this note
To give you all hope I will be hear when you return home,
My Love, I am with you wherever you are, right in your heart.

Lilly Emery
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Submitted on October 13, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAB AXC XXD DXX XXC XAX XDCX XXB
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,146
Words 257
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 3

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