A Breath Away



I'm not reduced to fragments by your smiles;
filled with hate's pathetic curves of promise,
look in these eyes and collapse your spirit
for those wounds will not condemn me - I'm free.
Never will those cold fingers of distrust
touch this beauty held on the tip of love,
I'm a petal unfolded - perfection,
don't try to arrange me in jealousy,
or permanently freeze me with iced looks,
broken is that stare in your reflection,
not these wonderful wings of desire.

I'm a breath away from your explosions
of defeat; vanquished frustration's ardour,
perhaps your victory dance will shuffle
along corridors of self-imagery
when you fall into the chasm's pain.
I'm too strong for your weakness to break me,
don't think that your heart will fool this passion,
for a moment's passed and I shall go now,
fly away from bitter contempt's dead whims.
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Submitted on June 04, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXAXXBAXBX XAXAXABXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 818
Words 145
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 9

Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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