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Extraordinary you

Remarkable you; Almighty & Uplifting even as I walk the plank, I start to Think, oh Mercy & Grace I Need to Give Thanks, Marvelous you, I Marvel to Model after you, If not for the mold be broken, could I be Magnificent just like you, with a rope tightly around my neck how I try to jump, decend with your arms tightly around me I find No End, but you say start "again"; Amazingly & Annointing No Hindering Finger or Pointing, Just Coddling & Swaddling, all my Hurts & Disappointments I've been Swallowing & Bottling, My Father My God, Save me; with Broken Wings I fly, I Fly Highhh, I do soar, then I Crash & Hit the Floor, God says "Up Up Up" and I Fly once more, you Break The Chains of Bleeding Hearts, Doctor and Surgery with Biblical Blessings & Unforeseen Lessons, Strengthened by You Won't Allow Me To Bleed Out, I Hear you Root for me I Hear you Shout, "Get Up", I wanna stay down Lord Remove All Doubt, As I Humbly Serve You You'll Never Ever Cast Me Out.
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Submitted by JhainDoh on March 10, 2021

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Extraordinary You

Oh God will Strengthen us through our Grief Pain and Sorrow. Submit and Commit he'll show you he Exist. Amen more…

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  • S.Zaynab.Kamoonpury
    A great appealing supplication, poetic invocation wow. To God right? Kudos!

    Plz do read and comment my newest poem too, im new here but have been writing on other sites since ages.
    LikeReplyReport 110 months ago
  • Bmaxey94
    LikeReplyReport 21 year ago
    • JhainDoh
      Thank You love
      LikeReplyReport 11 year ago
  • robertrad2021
    embedded nails, of wise words. good.
    LikeReplyReport 21 year ago
    • JhainDoh
      Thank You so much
      LikeReplyReport 11 year ago
  • urladee21
    nice flow and very deep
    LikeReplyReport 11 year ago
    • JhainDoh
      Thank You so much I hope it was something relatable. Feel free to read more and engage me with any questions you delight.
      LikeReplyReport 11 year ago


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