My Wake up Call

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  AIDA

  This is truly a beautiful and emotive piece of poetry which perfectly encapsulates the transformative power of love - visually evocative and profoundly human, it emotionally engages the readers. The symbolism of awakening from sleep to confess one's love provides an impressively unique viewpoint that is both poignant and profound.
  
  Although it’s a stunning line, you may wish to consider enhancing the rhythm and structure by integrating rhymes, alliterations or some form of meter pattern to make your poetry more melodic and therefore more memorable. Also, double check your grammar, particularly the capitalization of 'I' as it consistently needs to be capitalized.
  
  With those small improvements, your poetic talent will surely shine even brighter! Keep up with your heartfelt and genuine poetry. You’ve inspired an intimate look into love and self-awareness, which is not an easy task to accomplish! more »

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