Roller-coaster Love



As sadness reigns over me, dark clouds & rains over me; salt water fills my optical vision & incision in my heart & now I bleed, oh God why I plead, thats who I want thats who I need, love flees, I thought love is free, Agape/Unconditional theres degrees,  in time salty waters will receed, I will love again in you I believe, Gods soil is where I sow seeds, & they grow & produce trees, hurt and heal, love again or never wanna again feel, confusion about how much of you my love was real, did I make it all up, what was the big blow up, the turn up was turned down,  laughter & happiness disrupt, why not discuss instead we fight/fuss and cuss and it hurts, I feel the absence of what could be my better half vanishing from my heart felt grasp, my future love becoming my past; how long will this vacancy last, connected to you so I try to hold on, It no longer matters who's right or wrong, harmony & melody is missing lyrics to a potential love song, another night & another day with out you I must mourn, my emotional state is torn, I think hold on or is it time to move on, wait patiently until dawn, unwrapped like a ball of yawn, tired and sleepy I yawn.
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Submitted by JhainDoh on January 13, 2021

Modified on March 14, 2023

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JhainDoh

Death is sad but I want to explore the beauty in death. I am most free when I write so I will write ugly beautiful truths. I hope to inspire teach and motivate through poetry. The Poetry Form is my Coinage known as Unorthodox Rhythmic which is a melodic form of writing. Currently I am a Song Writer also on Reverberation. Writing is my world andI write Advertisments/Commercials/& Comedy. Skies the limit and beyond write what you like. more…

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  • NicoleBSimba
    Amazing ❤️
    LikeReply 22 years ago
  • ambrosianyc
    This is absolutely a wonderfully written poem
    LikeReply 22 years ago
    • JhainDoh
      Thank you so much. I pray everyone who reads my Poetic truth will be blessed. Thank you and please keep reading
      LikeReply2 years ago
  • 4zebra2u
    Speaking of roller coaster love....
    He terrorized her with titillating thrills
    as if her body where his fun house and amusement park
    of loopty loops and Ferris wheels like an air castle in that little damp cubby hole fantasy of umbra sweet curves marked Venus dreamscape 
    LikeReply 23 years ago
    • JhainDoh
      wow I like that. Now thats sensual. Now I know why the call it an Amusement Park
      LikeReply 13 years ago
    • 4zebra2u
      I like it when you like it ;))))))
      LikeReply3 years ago
    • JhainDoh
      Just reaching out to say I hope you come back and explore more of my Poetic exploits. Thx u
      LikeReply2 years ago
  • chyerel_c
    Roller coasters have too many ups and downs .
    LikeReply 23 years ago
    • JhainDoh
      Thanks cuz for always being supportive of me. As a child and as A Grown Woman. I pray everyone who reads my poem will be blessed through and through.
      LikeReply2 years ago
  • MoonFlowers
    This is beautiful. The rhythm is amazing
    LikeReply 33 years ago

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