"My America Da Great"

Red white & blue is our American flag...But as Americans what do we stand for, We got the Great United Nations but we still have violence & war, A modern day apartheid with an unethical core,  the red must be for blood shed & the white is for privileged, blue must be gang related, our values & morals hardly seem American or integrated, although this time we're not color separated, morally we've evaporated, as Rulers we've conquered & berated, so much of MY AMERICA wasn't anticipated, the desirables are becoming silenced & regulated, while undesirables are being elevated & delegated, and when the American Dream isn't what it seems & more like the Matrix or a Facebook meme, and My America Da Great won't act like a team,  being human means acting like human beings, the Star Spangle Banner we collectively sing,  peace hangs on by a thread as Alarm bells of chaos rings, my civil America together change we can bring, our ancestry constitution, our generational inheritance is becoming past tense,  together we stand makes a whole lot of sense, no walls no fence, these thoughts divide & have no melting pot substance, America Da Great can and will get better, I dedicate this to the country I love & thats why I wrote this letter.

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What America will Your Children Live In... And Your Children's children... Decide

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Submitted by JhainDoh on January 04, 2021

Modified by JhainDoh on January 11, 2022

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Death is sad but I want to explore the beauty in death. I am most free when I write so I will write ugly beautiful truths. I hope to inspire teach and motivate through poetry. The Poetry Form is my Coinage known as Unorthodox Rhythmic which is a melodic form of writing. Currently I am a Song Writer also on Reverberation. Writing is my world andI write Advertisments/Commercials/& Comedy. Skies the limit and beyond write what you like. more…

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