Breakup or Breakthrough



If I must let go theres so much I haven't said & so much you need to know,
How I miss your smile & long to see your glow, How my heart wants you to be near, and how much I wanted to be close to you inspite of my fears,
Just know I'll go, lovingly but reluctantly,  Saddened by unfounded possibilities,
I'll leave if I must, I shared parts of my life with you and gave you my trust,
We think we in sync, get high from dawn to dusk,
If this new beginning ends I'll walk away with more cuts,
While you stay silent and run, I'm here I write and fight,
In the midst of darkness im your light,
Leaving you or giving you up will leave me with tears all night,
So I ask you, what should I do, take your silence as a clue, u tell me what would you do
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Submitted by JhainDoh on January 13, 2021

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Death is sad but I want to explore the beauty in death. I am most free when I write so I will write ugly beautiful truths. I hope to inspire teach and motivate through poetry. The Poetry Form is my Coinage known as Unorthodox Rhythmic which is a melodic form of writing. Currently I am a Song Writer also on Reverberation. Writing is my world andI write Advertisments/Commercials/& Comedy. Skies the limit and beyond write what you like. more…

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  • Maddi.2058
    hi i just recently went through a breakup and i feel sad by it. what should i do?
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