My SUICIDE OBITUARY



Don't cry for me please, I do not want anyone to mourn, I was here in your present day, but its now that I'm gone, Memories live although the flesh must die, I had to go, If I couldn't live than I would just be here to survive, my spirit was way too enormous to stay, I was so limited in this earthly mudane place, I felt isolated in a world filled with space, had legs like Jackie Joyner but I couldn't run this race, now my emojis are smiley face, God has me in a better place, I'm at peace im with his grace, I could've stayed & maybe caught a case,  with walls around me stagnating,  my ability to create,  mold and shape, turn me from human being to being an ape, losing my mind can you help me to locate, God Almighty Devine, this place can dull your mind, take your glow & dim your shine, take me leaving as a sign, I'm a part of God's Perfect Design, remember I Write and Rhyme, think of me as the morning sunshine,  life & death is just a fleshly thin line, hide me in your heart just in case you lose your mind, I will forever be here like dimensions of time.
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Submitted by JhainDoh on January 04, 2021

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JhainDoh

Death is sad but I want to explore the beauty in death. I am most free when I write so I will write ugly beautiful truths. I hope to inspire teach and motivate through poetry. The Poetry Form is my Coinage known as Unorthodox Rhythmic which is a melodic form of writing. Currently I am a Song Writer also on Reverberation. Writing is my world andI write Advertisments/Commercials/& Comedy. Skies the limit and beyond write what you like. more…

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  • chyerel_c
    Wow I and digging your poem here , thanks for letting me know .
    LikeReply 33 years ago
  • 4zebra2u
    Is Jane Doe JhainDoh? Like toe tag jewelry with a little kink ? Is that a kind of beauty in death ?

    takes the shadowed vow
    bride of submission
    happy in his hands
    falling as silence falls
    she spreads like bat wing umbrellas 
    LikeReply 23 years ago
    • JhainDoh
      thx 4 the read and yes its like Jane Doe pronunciation...I do things that promote a conversation get a pen and take dictation. Wowww I like the way u piggy bavk
      LikeReply3 years ago
    • 4zebra2u
      Thank you Jhain
      I love to get baited by a poem. I write a lot about death, erotascism ,the sacrificial and felt a possible undertone of that in your poem You've got me wondering if your poem suggests this?
      " tell me how she hooked your mind" :)
      Z
       
      LikeReply 13 years ago

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