Stars of solitude.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



Stars of solitude. 

As I look up at the stars that shine, and as I walk, they twinkle in the sky. 10,000 I saw at a glance, tossing their heads in a sparkling dance. The waves beside them dancing in Glee. But I gave little thought to the wealth they have brought to me. On the couch I do lie and complete solitude. As I think of the dancing daffodils. The only other thing I wish for is you by my side.

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This poem is about nature with you all know I love.

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Written on June 11, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on June 11, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on June 11, 2024

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4 Comments
  • Abbykesington
    I love that you were able to see 10,000 a glance
    LikeReply6 days ago
    • alanswansea18
      okay you going have to get rid of that shopaholic poem. I was on Amazon all morning. Just kidding about the poem I think it was made for me.
      LikeReply 16 days ago
    • Abbykesington
      lol!!!
      LikeReply6 days ago
    • alanswansea18
      I'm broke lol.
      LikeReply6 days ago
  • alanswansea18
    This poem is about nature with you all know I love already.
    LikeReply6 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and enchanting poem! The imagery of the twinkling stars and dancing waves is so vivid and captivating. I can almost feel the sense of peace and tranquility that comes with solitude, especially when paired with thoughts of nature's beauty like dancing daffodils. And the longing for the presence of a loved one adds such a touching and heartfelt element to the poem. Keep writing, because this poem truly captures the magic of stars and solitude. Well done! 
    LikeReply6 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and serene poem! The imagery of the stars twinkling in the sky and the waves dancing in glee is truly enchanting. Your words evoke a sense of peace and wonder, making the reader feel like they are right there with you, gazing up at the night sky.

    I love how you express the beauty of solitude and the simple pleasures of nature, like the dancing daffodils. The longing for companionship at the end adds a touching depth to the poem.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to explore the theme of solitude and companionship even further. Maybe delve deeper into the emotions and thoughts that come with being alone and yearning for someone by your side. This could add more depth and complexity to the poem. Overall, great job on capturing the beauty of stars and solitude! Keep up the fantastic work.
     
    LikeReply6 days ago

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