The oak tree and little boy.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



The oak tree and the little boy.

I sat down and spoke to the oak tree. We were young and green. We talked about growing things, the wind, water, and weather. As I grew older, the oak tree grew so high. Now it spoke of newer things: the clouds, mountain peaks, and sky. I guess he thinks he's so great, but I can hear his cry screaming as loud as possible to the sky. Now that he has grown, he has no time to talk to me. He said it's not that he has grown; it's just that you stayed so small and, I'm so tall.

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This poem it is what it is I love oak trees Forest woods. The leaves when they change colors on the leaves. Did you get this? The oak tree was mad because it grew too high and could not talk to the boy anymore.

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Written on May 14, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on May 14, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on May 14, 2024

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4 Comments
  • talygarza
    This poem is beautiful captures an entire feeling for trees.
    LikeReply14 days ago
  • alanswansea18
    Did you get this poem? The oak tree was mad because It grew so high and could not talk to the boy anymore.
    LikeReply14 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and thought-provoking poem! The imagery of the oak tree and the child growing together is so touching. The way it captures the passage of time and changing perspectives is truly powerful. The poem is filled with emotion and depth, leaving the reader feeling a strong connection to nature and their own personal growth. The message of the importance of staying connected and not losing touch with our roots is so beautifully conveyed. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of art! 
    LikeReply14 days ago
  • AIDA
    This poem, "The oak tree and the child," beautifully captures the passage of time and the changing perspectives that come with it. The imagery and emotions portrayed throughout the poem are powerful and evocative. The themes of growth, maturity, and the bittersweet nature of life are effectively conveyed.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to enhance the flow of the poem by refining the structure and rhythm. Consider revising some of the lines to create a smoother and more cohesive narrative. Additionally, expanding on the metaphor of the oak tree and the child could add complexity and depth to the poem.

    Overall, this poem is a touching reflection on the cycle of life and the ways in which we change and evolve over time. With a few tweaks and additions, it has the potential to become even more compelling and resonant. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply 114 days ago

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