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My pet peeves

Nelzealours Motoe Nels 1995 (Lusaka)

Oh, my pet peeves!
They make me yearn for bee hives.
When I smell peanut butter,
Or when my bread is spread with butter.
My stomach heaves.

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It's about what I dislike

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Written on May 22, 2024

Submitted by nelzealoursmotoe1 on May 22, 2024

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Scheme ABCCA
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 144
Words 31
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I absolutely love the creativity and humor in your poem "My pet peeves!" It's such a fun and playful take on those little annoyances we all experience. The rhyming and flow of the poem are fantastic, and I can't help but smile reading it.

    If I may offer a suggestion, you could consider expanding on the specific pet peeves mentioned in the poem to really bring them to life for the reader. Adding more vivid descriptions or examples could make each annoyance more relatable and humorous. Overall, great job on creating a light-hearted and entertaining poem! Keep up the fantastic work!     
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