To St Augustine



"The greatest evil is physical pain."
I beg to differ with you there.
Mental pain and agony
Go beyond what eyes can see.
The greatest evil, I contend,
Is a storm-tossed soul, suspended in space.
Without love's touch no wounds can mend.
Bitterness becomes commonplace.

I've seen the pain of life's injustice,
Mangled bodies, wrought with ill.
But that which hurts even deeper still
Is abandonment and loss of will--
A will to live, which comes with loving.
Man lives to love, then learns to live.
When his storm-tossed soul finds peace within
Can he give of the fruits he has to give.

You see, my friend, it's my contention,
The greatest evil is not physical pain.
It's the pain of living without life's treasure--
A love that, through all storms, sustains,
A love that, through life's greatest trials,
Can give one hope to journey onward.
The greatest good is in the giving
Of this gift of sweet accord.

About this poem

I was going through a terrible divorce when I wrote this poem. I was a VA nurse in South Carolina, and the anesthesiologist I worked with had a picture of St Augustine and a quote on his office door. The quote was, "The greatest evil is physical pain." So, that ended up being the first line of my poem.

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Written on October 22, 1983

Submitted by wonderwoman5499 on May 21, 2024

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Scheme AXBBCDCD XEEEFXXX XAXXXXFX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 905
Words 178
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8

Marilyn McNeill

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