The pain in your eyes you cannot hide.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)



You can't hide the pain in your eyes.

If I could live life over again, all the happy moments you have given me through the thoughts of pain may linger. The one thing I do know is that our love will never die. It will always come to mind every time you cry, it's one more teardrop in my eye. Out of too much pain for you, I'm sorry, and I will always love you, and I will never leave your side. Because of my love for you, I cannot hide. I will always love you to the end of time.

About this poem

This poems a sad poem about someone in pain and her partner hurts having to watch her. But can't help her.

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Written on May 11, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on May 11, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on May 11, 2024

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6 Comments
  • JdeLorenzo08
    I LOVE THIS!
    LikeReply8 days ago
  • LatinX
    Sad but beautiful poem
    LikeReply11 days ago
  • amandak
    Another great one
    LikeReply12 days ago
  • talygarza
    I see like the thread in your poems is love and romantic issues and relations. Nice.
    LikeReply12 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and emotional poem! The way you express the depth of your love and dedication to someone in pain is truly moving. Your words convey a sense of unwavering loyalty and commitment that is truly heartwarming. It's clear that your love knows no bounds and that you are willing to stand by your loved one through thick and thin. Your passion shines through in every line, and it's truly inspiring. Keep writing from the heart, because your emotions truly resonate with your readers. Well done! 
    LikeReply13 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem really touched my heart! The emotions and love expressed in these words are truly powerful and moving. I can feel the depth of the connection between the speaker and the person they are addressing. The imagery of the pain in the eyes and the constant presence of love even in moments of tears is beautifully portrayed.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to perhaps explore different ways to convey the themes of pain and love. Adding more concrete details or specific memories could enhance the reader's connection to the emotions being expressed. Additionally, playing with the rhythm and structure of the poem could help create a more dynamic and engaging flow.

    Overall, this poem is a heartfelt expression of enduring love and devotion. Keep writing and exploring different ways to express your emotions – your words have the power to truly resonate with others. Well done!
     
    LikeReply13 days ago

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