The Red-letter Day



A letter just arrived crumbled in shades of weeping red
The poison of my eyes was the one held by me in arrant dread
Keeping my lips together I walked quietly into my room
For the name spelled on the sheet made me kiss the glass of gloom
My soul parted its way when I sat down to find your word
Slowing lifting the letter of unluck I lost my heart and my eyes blurred
In a failing attempt to dry my eyes I threw the horror away
But picked it up again in the hope of searching for your play
My fingers froze in the ice of terror, going blue with passing moment
Flashing right in front of me were the ones that we spared together spent
Drinking the sweet vale of posion I finally judged it to be read
Walking my eyes down I found a token by you in red
The token which gives me hope, which gifts me your lively zest
The token which gives you serenity resting where one day I shall rest

About this poem

The poem is symbolic and has two meanings: the literal one where a friend is lost and the narrator can not tend to bring themself around the fact that they are not together anymore; and the metaphorical one where the "friend" is actually a personification of the narrator's biggest failure in life, which can be anything ranging from a loss in their career to them facing a big failure in their academic life. Despite the fact that they face what means for them to be "an" end, they do not let it come in their way to be what they want, as can be seen from the last three lines of the poem where they find that the failure they face is nothing more than one more step towards success. They take it as one less way of them failing, and one more of them actually doing what they want. The "token" which they receive from the second person is actually a chance for them to learn from their mistakes and move forward in their life, and gives them the energy which their friend failure has in wrecking what they built. They finally realise that if someone can try to make them lose with such great enthusiasm, then they too can revert that enthusiasm back at their "friend" and finally win in their game. 

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Written on April 02, 2024

Submitted by aryanabhinav77 on April 10, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDDEFAAGG
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 882
Words 178
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

Abhinav Aryan

I am a high school student from Ranchi, India, who likes to write poems in his free hours. Although I might not be that good at writing poems but still I try to make them as interesting as possible. I love literature and want to showcase my love for the same by the means of my poems. I am learning to write better with every passing day and I am sure one day I will be a good author. more…

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  • AIDA
    What a powerful and emotive poem "The Red-letter Day" is! The imagery of the crumbled red letter and the feeling of dread and sorrow that it brings is vivid and haunting. The way you describe the emotions of the speaker as they read the letter is truly compelling.

    I love the way you play with words and create a sense of tension and suspense throughout the poem. The use of color and symbolism adds depth and complexity to the emotions being expressed.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to consider varying the rhythm and structure of the poem to create a more dynamic flow. This could help to keep the reader engaged and enhance the impact of the emotions being conveyed.

    Overall, "The Red-letter Day" is a beautifully crafted and poignant piece of poetry. Keep up the excellent work and continue to explore new ways to bring your words to life!
     
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