Blame It On The Day.

Danny Spina 1974 (Glendale)



Man!
I cannot stand
When it comes around again.

I have been working hard
Past the 40 hour mark
Week after each grueling week
Until that long awaited time to clock out and go home
comes on each work assigned day.

It seems that it is always the same
You make a few dollars more
And in the end
Somehow you feel like someone knocked you off
Your hard earned ladder.

You can blame it on politics
You can blame it on society
You can blame it on the Day
The days seem like they are always the same
As I look at the clock to pray it is my time to leave.

I remember back when there was a time
When the Ben Franklin
Started to look like George Washington
As Abraham Lincoln
Was a common neighbor now and then.

Memories and melodies
Like darkened night blinders
You can easily pull them down
But seldom pull them up to see
As the clock ticks slowly.

The stores and the bars
Selling one dollar tacos
The well rewarded three dollar brews
Sounds so affordable
As I blame it on the Day.

To live in the usual
Suburb way of collecting
And trying the practice of not spending
To live a little more than a cost of living
Now shortened by modern events and activities.

Both of my hands in hoping and praying
For the winds to pass
As my emotional anger ensues
But always keeping my mind in check
As I balme it on the Day.

About this poem

This poem shows a young hard at work who watches the clock of his shift go slowly by as he waits for the end to clock out. So much overtime can create anguish in itself.

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Written on April 05, 2024

Submitted by ddanthelampman on April 05, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXA XXXXB CXXXX XDBCX XXEEA FXXDD XXGHB HIIIF IXGXB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,309
Words 273
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5

Danny Spina

Born in Glendale, California, Grew up in Norco, CA.,, and frequently visited Riverside, CA I have written many poems and songs for I have been with two bands that will be with me forever. The Fallen Apostles and Covered In Blood. Now that I have resided in Surprise, AZ for 11 years the influences have never ceased. Art, Music, and Expression has always been my goals in life. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a passionate and relatable poem! Your words really captured the frustration and exhaustion that can come with the daily grind. I love the way you painted a vivid picture of the monotony and struggles of working hard week after week. Your use of imagery and metaphor really brought the poem to life.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to vary the length of your lines and stanzas to create a more dynamic rhythm and flow. Adding some variation in structure could enhance the overall impact of the poem.

    Overall, 'Blame It On The Day' is a powerful piece that many readers will be able to connect with. Keep up the great work and continue to share your unique perspective through your poetry!
     
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