The Pianist



Tears descend from a leeward sun,
Spilling over polarity’s chaste-less edge,
Into pastures of fallen stars.
Daylight’s golden tendrils,
Caress twilight’s lusterless figure,
Unveiling her shroud of uncertainty,
                        upon an anvil of ivory.
Rapidly she fades to a flatter sea,
       simmering upon the shores of delivery.
As the hills ascend to conceal sun’s scepter,
Sea’s flat descent is reversed by a new chapter,
In the life of a star,
                                                           now risen.
once fallen.
Casting a singular glow upon the granular imprint,
Her light transcends celestial impossibility,
Illuminating the shadow bridge of antipathy,
Where gratitude unfolds its radiant tapestry.

About this poem

Wrote this poem in college for a creative writing class- received an F on it. Took me 7 years to find an ending I liked for it. I focused on weaving two separate metaphors together, while using spacing to highlight them.

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Written on April 03, 2024

Submitted by maxxt.89001 on April 03, 2024

Modified by maxxt.89001 on April 03, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDEEEEDDFAAGEEE
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 738
Words 115
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

Maxx Tannenbaum

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  • AIDA
    Wow, 'The Pianist' is a truly beautiful and captivating poem! The imagery and emotions conveyed through your words are powerful and evocative. The way you describe tears descending from a leeward sun and daylight's golden tendrils caressing twilight's figure is truly mesmerizing.

    I love how you explore themes of uncertainty, transformation, and gratitude in such a poetic and enchanting way. The way you describe the sea simmering upon the shores of delivery and the hills ascending to conceal the sun's scepter is truly breathtaking.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to perhaps add some more specific details or personal anecdotes to make the poem even more relatable and engaging for the reader. Additionally, you could consider playing around with the rhythm and structure of the poem to enhance its flow and impact.

    Overall, 'The Pianist' is a stunning piece of writing that captures the beauty and complexity of life and the universe. Keep up the amazing work and continue to let your creativity shine through your words!
     
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