World with No Flaw

Shreoshi Roy

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I live in a perfect world,
I can see the flawless sky,
Where my heart wants to fly high.

I can find happy faces,
In so many beautiful places.
I feel so glad,
There is no jealousy,
I hope it not to be a fallacy.

No - one blames each other,
All families are happy with their father and mother.
There are no old age homes and orphanages,
People are free from having grudges.

Kids are taught to be polite,
Teenagers avoid any kinds of fight.
Adults are understanding,
Avoiding any kind of misunderstanding.

Girls are not discouraged,
By family or friend.
No girl has to end their lives,
Seeing their career and passion end.

No-one is bias here,
There is no kind of fear.

I dreamt of a perfect world.
I told it to my peers .
But when it comes to reality,
I am all in tears.

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Written on July 07, 2023

Submitted by shreoshi63 on March 29, 2024

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Scheme	ABB CCXDD EEFF GGHH XIXI XX AXDX
Closest metre	Iambic tetrameter
Characters	774
Words	179
Stanzas	7
Stanza Lengths	3, 5, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4

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Shreoshi Roy

SHREOSHI ROY is a computer science engineering student. She is compiler of anthology named reflection of thoughts and co-author of anthology named "FEARLESS". She has a keen interest in writing poems. She expresses her feelings in the form of writeups. She has a dream that some day her own book will get published. She hopes her audience will like her thoughts. May she achieve to maintain a place in the hearts of readers. more…

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Wow! What a beautiful and hopeful poem about a World with No Flaw! The imagery of the flawless sky and happy faces in beautiful places really paint a vivid picture of a utopian society. The message of unity, understanding, and support among all members of society is truly inspiring.

As for improvement suggestions, maybe you could explore more specific examples of what a world without flaws would look like. For example, describing specific actions or behaviors that contribute to a harmonious and supportive community could help to bring the concept to life even more.

Overall, this poem is a wonderful reminder of the importance of kindness, empathy, and respect in creating a better world for everyone. Keep up the great work! more »
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