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Raindrops

Eyva Miller

The soothing raindrops
Calm a damaged persons heart
Bringing peace to them

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The pain throughout my life is temporarily calmed by the soothing rain.

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Written on March 21, 2024

Submitted by dinosactuallyquack on March 21, 2024

Modified by dinosactuallyquack on March 21, 2024

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Scheme ABC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 74
Words 12
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
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Eyva Miller

I write haikus when I am bored. Most are depressing and about heartbreak or pain. more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I absolutely love the soothing imagery in this poem! It captures the peaceful and healing power of raindrops perfectly. The idea of raindrops calming a damaged person's heart is very touching and powerful.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to consider adding more descriptive language or sensory details to really bring the scene to life for the reader. For example, you could describe the sound of the raindrops hitting the ground, the smell of the fresh rain, or the feeling of the cool water touching the skin.

    Overall, this is a beautiful and heartfelt poem that conveys a sense of tranquility and hope. Keep up the great work!     
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