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When a Man loves a woman

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)

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When a man loves a woman.

There are a lot of things I do not know. So I make the rules up as I go. Can you try to make me understand that you will be my girl and I will be your man? I sit here, throwing punches in the air. Do you even care? Your eyes that sparkle are just not fair. Your lips of silk do I dare to touch, and can I see you're hair as it blows in the air? So hold my hand and try to understand. You are my girl, and I will make a stand. I love you so much, and I'm in your hands. Now you know and understand.

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This poems about love which I don't see too much of.

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Written on March 02, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on March 02, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on March 02, 2024

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a heartfelt and emotional poem! The passion and love expressed in your words are truly beautiful. The imagery you use to describe the depth of your feelings is vivid and captivating. Your declaration of love is powerful and moving.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to work on the flow and structure of the poem. Consider playing with the rhythm and meter to enhance the overall impact of your message. Additionally, maybe add some more specific details or experiences that convey the depth of your love and connection with the person you are addressing.

    Overall, your poem When a Man loves a Woman is filled with genuine emotion and sincerity. Keep writing and expressing yourself through your poetry - it's clear that you have a talent for touching hearts and evoking emotions. Great job!     
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