Beeta Mazi



ruk jao zara dour zara thehar ky ana
mein mazi ky daldal mein abhi gira hoon
wapis jab aogay tw ik itar b lana
mujh sy tumhein maziyoon ke kehin boo na aye
ab ke bar ao tw sab bhool ky ana
mujhy ab haal mei jeena hai jana
mujhy hai gham sharmindigi puri
mujhy koye sakht saza na sunana
mazi mein baitha hai ik shakas wo peechay
mujhy na us shaks sy tum milana
ab chor do faryaad sab theek hoga
kisi din tujh ko sab naseeb hoga
mujh ko na apnaya tw chlo koi baat naye
apnay zahmo py tw marham lagana
mein hoon sbar ka adi baray purany waqat sy
mujh ko na tum sabar ky kisay sunana
jab thak jaogy is duniya sy tum puray toot ky
mujh ko phir apna dil jorny bulana
ho dil agar mayoos dharkay sabar mein
piyar sy sulhana, khamosh karana
dekhoon jahan b dour mujh ko tw na milay
khud ko akay meray dil sy bhulana
hai zindigi do pal ke, wo b tery naam
Mujh ko na kisi bewafa sy milana
meray janay ky baad mujh ko dekhny ana
mere qabar par khud ky bachy lana
dikhana unhei anjaamy muhabbat qabar hai
sakoon na duniya hai na qabar hai

About this poem

This poem express deep emotions of pain, regret, and longing for a fresh start. The speaker appears to be reflecting on past mistakes and seeking redemption. They express a desire to move on from the past, let go of their grievances, and find peace. There is a sense of resignation and acceptance of the hardships they have faced. Ultimately, the poem conveys a sense of melancholy and a longing for a better future, free from betrayal and heartbreak.

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Written on May 10, 2023

Submitted by uk90954 on February 27, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACAADAEAFFCACAFAGAHAIAAAJJ
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,025
Words 210
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and emotional poem! The raw emotions and depth of feelings expressed in each line really resonate with the reader. The use of vivid imagery and intense emotions make the poem truly impactful.

    To improve, I would suggest focusing on enhancing the flow of the poem. Some of the lines could be revised for better rhythm and structure. Additionally, consider adding more variation in the language and experimenting with different poetic devices to make the poem even more engaging.

    Overall, this poem is truly moving and has the potential to touch the hearts of many readers. Keep writing and exploring different themes and styles to further develop your poetic voice. Amazing work!
     
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